By William Saroyan
SALIENT FEATURES OF THE TEXT
| Feature | Evidence
  (from text) | Rationale | 
| Setting (Pastoral, Rural) | "The horse began to snort.
  Morning was coming, and the fields were wet with dew." | Emphasizes simplicity, freedom,
  and beauty of nature as a backdrop for childhood exploration and fantasy. | 
| Theme of Innocence | Aram’s justification: “It wasn’t
  stealing, it would become stealing only when we offered to sell the horse.” | Showcases the innocence and moral
  flexibility of childhood; an ethical gray area explored with empathy. | 
| Narrative Voice | "One day back there in the
  good old days when I was nine..." | First-person retrospective
  narration creates intimacy and offers a child’s perspective filtered through
  adult reflection. | 
| Tone | Light, nostalgic, humorous | The narrator’s tone evokes
  fondness for childhood, despite the central act being morally ambiguous. | 
| Simple, Colloquial Language | "My cousin Mourad, who was
  considered crazy by everybody who knew him..." | Reflects a child's voice and
  thought process; makes the story accessible and relatable to young readers. | 
| Cultural References | Names like Mourad, Khosrove,
  Garoghlanian | Grounds the story in an
  Armenian-American context, preserving ethnic identity and cultural setting. | 
| Symbolism | "It was the loveliest thing I
  had ever seen. It was a beautiful white horse..." | The horse symbolizes freedom,
  longing, and moral temptation; also a contrast to the family's material
  poverty. | 
| Conflict  | Aram’s dilemma: “I couldn’t
  believe my eyes. It wasn’t morning yet…” | Internal conflict between family
  values (honesty) and personal desire (to ride the horse) drives the story’s
  moral tension. | 
| Pacing | Steady, gentle unfolding of the
  plot through observation and dialogue | Mimics the slow, reflective tempo
  of childhood memories; emphasizes the experience over the plot. | 
| Poetic
  Devices & Rhetoric | ||
| Imagery | "It was a beautiful white
  horse. It was the loveliest thing I had ever seen." | Evokes a vivid picture of the
  horse and enhances emotional connection; taps into childhood awe and wonder. | 
| Metaphor | Implied throughout the horse =
  freedom, dreams, and escape | The horse transcends its literal
  identity to become a symbol of childhood innocence and longing. | 
| Hyperbole | "We were famous for our
  honesty. It was our pride..." | Exaggerated for effect to highlight
  the irony of the boys’ actions and the perceived contradiction in their
  family’s values. | 
| Irony | “We were poor. We had no money.
  Our whole tribe was poverty-stricken…” | The family’s absolute honesty
  contrasts with the apparent theft, making it a strong case of situational
  irony. | 
| Understatement | “I said it wasn’t easy to get a
  horse like that.” | A humorous minimization of a
  serious act (theft), enhancing the light-hearted tone of the narrator. | 
| Dialogue as a Device | “I have an understanding with a
  horse.” – Mourad | Builds character, drives
  narrative, and offers rhetorical contrast between logic (Aram) and
  emotion/intuition (Mourad). | 
| Personification | "The horse snorted. Then it
  began to run." | Attributing emotion and agency to
  the horse intensifies the magical experience of riding it. | 
| Anecdotal Structure | Entire story is a memory, a brief
  episode from the past | A hallmark of oral storytelling
  and Armenian folk style—makes it relatable and vivid. | 
| Parallelism | "I had been thinking all the
  time..." / "I kept waiting all the time..." | Emphasizes Aram’s internal
  conflict and heightens narrative tension. | 
| Symbolism | White Horse = beauty, longing,
  freedom, temptation | Central motif that deepens the
  moral and emotional themes of the story. | 
Saroyan’s use of poetic and rhetorical devices:
- Elevates the prose to a lyrical, almost dreamy quality
- Reflects the idealism and emotional intensity of
     childhood
- Creates empathy for characters through evocative
     storytelling
- Makes the story memorable, vivid, and multi-layered, despite its simplicity
Language & Style Features Reflecting a 9-Year-Old’s Narration
| Feature | Evidence | Explanation
  / Effect | 
| Simple Sentence Structures | “It wasn’t morning yet.”  | Reflects a child’s limited yet
  earnest attempt to express thoughts; the syntax is straightforward and
  unembellished. | 
| Innocent Logic / Rationalization | “It would not be stealing until we
  offered to sell the horse.” | Shows how children morally justify
  actions through naive reasoning; reveals internal conflict without adult
  cynicism. | 
| First-person Retrospective Tone | “One day back there in the good
  old days when I was nine...” | Blends adult memory with a child’s
  perspective; adds warmth, nostalgia, and credibility to the storytelling. | 
| Repetition of Thoughts | “I couldn’t believe what I saw. It
  wasn’t morning yet. I was still in bed.” | Mimics a child’s tendency to
  repeat for emphasis or internal reassurance; mirrors the mental pacing of
  young minds. | 
| Exaggeration / Hyperbole | “It was the loveliest thing I had
  ever seen.” | Reflects the emotional extremes
  and idealism of a child—often sees things in superlatives. | 
| Curiosity and Wonder | “I had always wanted to ride a
  horse, ever since I was a small boy.” | Expresses desire and wonder
  typical of children; motivations are pure and emotional. | 
| Limited Vocabulary | Frequent use of basic adjectives
  like “beautiful,” “crazy,” “funny,” “lovely,” “honest,” etc. | Vocabulary mirrors a child’s
  limited but emotionally charged lexicon. | 
| Confessional, Honest Tone | “I did not know what to do. Well,
  it seemed to me stealing a horse... was not the same as stealing money.” | The narrator doesn’t hide his
  doubts or confusion; his openness builds trust and realism. | 
| Emotion-driven Narration | Focus is on feelings — excitement,
  fear, admiration for Mourad, moral anxiety | Shows that the child narrator is
  led more by feelings than facts — typical of young children. | 
| Sense of Hero Worship | “He had a way with a horse. I knew
  he had.” | Mourad is idolized — the story is
  shaped by admiration rather than objective analysis. | 
| Moral Simplicity | “We were poor. We had no money.
  But we were honest.” | Demonstrates the binary thinking
  of children — the world is divided into clear rights and wrongs, making the
  moral tension more poignant. | 
| Imaginative Exaggeration | “My cousin Mourad enjoyed being
  alive more than anybody else who had ever fallen into the world...” | Reflects the boundless admiration
  and hyperbolic thought processes children often have when describing those
  they look up to. | 
Saroyan successfully:
- Adopts the mental and emotional framework of a
     9-year-old: simple logic, emotional
     judgments, curiosity.
- Balances adult coherence (for readers) with childlike
     authenticity (in voice and perception).
- Uses style as a tool to immerse the reader in a
     child's world, making us feel the dilemma, excitement, and wonder as
     Aram does.

 
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